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Amy C. Shaw's avatar

Me, the underwriter, trying to fathom what it's like to have to cut instead of add, ha ha. To be fair, I sadly have to cut plenty too, in part thanks to pesky words like the ones you mentioned.

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E. A. Hendryx's avatar

Yeah I don’t usually over write this bad but I’m actually not sure *if* it was overwriting or just a long story 🤣 time and my editor will tell lol!

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Evelyn Griffith's avatar

This was great! Thank you! I also have a tendency to add filler words while writing and cutting them can be both unexpectedly hard and unexpectedly satisfying. I just worry that i'll lose the rhythm of the sentence and everything will sound clunky if I just start cutting all those words randomly. It does take thought, but you're right that most of them can go without it being a problem.

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E. A. Hendryx's avatar

I totally agree - I can’t just cut willy nilly as sometimes I need those words so it does take extra time!

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LG McCary's avatar

Very good reminders for authors (and editors). It’s easy to get hung up on the “right” way to do things, stop trusting your own instincts, and lose your unique voice in the process.

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E. A. Hendryx's avatar

Totally agree!

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Megan's avatar

You're making me even more excited for this book! It sounds so epic!

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E. A. Hendryx's avatar

I hope it’s good 😆😆😆

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